tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post4489888271045021441..comments2023-10-11T09:22:33.136-04:00Comments on Paperback Writer: EndersUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-60074203829123315812007-07-30T18:46:00.000-04:002007-07-30T18:46:00.000-04:00Coming in late, but my favorite ending line of all...Coming in late, but my favorite ending line of all time is from a poem as well - Invictus, by William Ernest Henley.<BR/><BR/><I>It matters not how strait the gate,<BR/>How charged with punishments the scroll.<BR/>I am the Master of my Fate.<BR/>I am the Captain of my soul.</I><BR/><BR/>ValAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-87091536694175156752007-07-28T10:31:00.000-04:002007-07-28T10:31:00.000-04:00I've only managed to write one ending line so far,...I've only managed to write one ending line so far, and I went for the sentimental. If I ever do rewrite that story, though, I think I'll keep it.<BR/><BR/>My all-time favorite ending was the snatch of poetry at the end of <I>The Two Princesses of Bamarre</I> by Gail Carson Levine; at 28 lines, I don't know if it counts as a "last line," but it stuck in my memory for a long, long time. The last bit especially:<BR/><BR/><I>Step follows step,<BR/>Hope follows courage,<BR/>Set your face toward danger,<BR/>Set your heart on victory--<BR/>Victory for Bamarre!</I>Mirihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18076693898421760613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-77161560013486385642007-07-27T09:52:00.000-04:002007-07-27T09:52:00.000-04:00In all but one book (Sympathy for the Devil) I've ...In all but one book (<B>Sympathy for the Devil</B>) I've had no idea how the thing would end until I wrote the ending. This isn't just the last line, either. This is the last scene or group of scenes that will wrap up the final big action, tie up lose ends, bring the whole thing to a satisfying conclusion, and land on that desperately critical last line. <BR/><BR/>By the time I hit the ending, I've been immersed in the book for a while, I've wished all the characters dead at least once, I've struggled through the middle, and the story has become meaningful to me on a lot of different levels. I'm generally on a tight deadline, so I've been writing hard.<BR/><BR/>Little things will start falling into place, there will be an 'Aha!' moment where I discover how all the stuff from before fits, and when that hits, I get sucked into the story and all spelling, grammar, punctuation, and awareness of overuse of words dies to the scene that starts playing out in my head.<BR/><BR/>I write like one possessed, get the last scene or group of scenes all in one fell swoop, come careening into the finale, and die on the last line. It hangs there. It taunts me. I write, rewrite, re-rewrite. I pace. I swear. And at some point, I'll hit a second 'Aha!' moment, and get the last five, or seven, or ten words. <BR/><BR/>But (again excepting SFTD) it's never easy. It always tortures me, just because it can.Hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695965074806897164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-35478846877931799332007-07-27T08:12:00.000-04:002007-07-27T08:12:00.000-04:00Funny this topic should come up because I just rea...Funny this topic should come up because I just read a book a really really liked and then felt that the last page sort of fizzled. I liked the dialogue, but I would have rearranged a bit myself. <BR/><BR/>My own endings tend to be dialogue and while I think they do the job and tie things up, since none of the last lines leap to mind I guess I won't win any awards either...Jenyfer Matthewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769550148821002722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-2272962590497823652007-07-27T06:48:00.000-04:002007-07-27T06:48:00.000-04:00I always loved the ending to Saki's (HH Munro) sho...I always loved the ending to Saki's (HH Munro) short story "The Open Window"<BR/><BR/><I>"Romance at short notice was her specialty"</I><BR/><BR/>WendyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-51704290721240464712007-07-26T21:28:00.000-04:002007-07-26T21:28:00.000-04:00Usually, mine end in dialogue of some sort. And un...Usually, mine end in dialogue of some sort. And unfortunately, it's usually a smart-ass quip. *sigh* I can't help myself.<BR/><BR/>But my favorite ending ever is actually from a poem - <I>The Lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock</I>.<BR/><BR/><I>We have lingered in the chambers of the sea<BR/>By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown<BR/>Till human voices wake us, and we drown.</I>GutterBallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17943760313844692975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-89481220744348285852007-07-26T20:43:00.000-04:002007-07-26T20:43:00.000-04:00I think unfortunately many writers pay far more at...I think unfortunately many writers pay far more attention to openings than to endings. That's understandable, but it can be disappointing to reach a stop rather than a satisfactory end. I always like it when the end ties into the beginning in some way. Wish I could always achieve that myself.<BR/><BR/>I was going to quote the last line from "Animal Farm", but I can't find my copy. Bah!nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00415222406280230021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-21600920845467342822007-07-26T17:22:00.000-04:002007-07-26T17:22:00.000-04:00My last line in a short story I have coming out is...My last line in a short story I have coming out is: <BR/><BR/>"Actions were better than words, and his tongue said everything she was feeling. Like she had finally come home."<BR/><BR/>Steamy, huh?Laura Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15715592787254471823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-38029147833930819412007-07-26T16:58:00.000-04:002007-07-26T16:58:00.000-04:00Endings are hard, and it's usually easier for me t...Endings are hard, and it's usually easier for me to think of ones I don't like than ones I do. When it comes down to it, if I'm going to be unsatisfied with any single aspect of my writing, you can bet that it will be the final line.Nicolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00415819230337026236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-53408760428956002272007-07-26T15:03:00.000-04:002007-07-26T15:03:00.000-04:00My favorite ender comes from So Long, And Thanks F...My favorite ender comes from So Long, And Thanks For All The Fish, the fourth in the Hitchhiker's guide to the Galaxy trilogy. "There was a point to this story, but it has temporarily escaped the chronicler's mind."Ink Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02718877829314889890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-28876381895729311832007-07-26T13:46:00.000-04:002007-07-26T13:46:00.000-04:00I'm a newbie - nothing published yet, but I'm work...I'm a newbie - nothing published yet, but I'm working on it. It doesn't always work out this way for me, but I like my endings to bring the story full circle. That's probably why my all-time favorite story ender is the last line of Stephen King's <I>The Dark Tower</I> - "The man in black fled across the desert and the gunslinger followed." It's also the first line of <I>The Gunslinger</I>, and as a first line, I think it's even more brilliant. Not only does it set up the protagonist and the antagonist, it has conflict and action, all in one little sentence.<BR/><BR/>Btw, I'm might be having a little trouble with Blogger, so if this message comes up a couple of times, I apologize.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-91453879826065568012007-07-26T12:32:00.000-04:002007-07-26T12:32:00.000-04:00My last lines are usually satisfactory, but won't ...My last lines are usually satisfactory, but won't win any awards, lol.<BR/><BR/>My favorites seem to lie with the classics, and leave me with a chill, not a sigh...<BR/><BR/>"And Darkness and Decay and the Red Death held illimitable dominion over all."~~Poe<BR/><BR/>"It is the beating of his hideous heart!"~~Poe<BR/><BR/>"And what rough beast, its hour come round at last,<BR/>Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born?"~~Yeatsrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04258822737734173873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-1416865464635875942007-07-26T12:08:00.000-04:002007-07-26T12:08:00.000-04:00The ending that leaps to mind is: Stat rosa pristi...The ending that leaps to mind is: <I>Stat rosa pristina nomine, nomina nuda tenemus</I>. The final line of Umberto Eco's <I>The Name of the Rose</I>. Brilliant ending. <BR/><BR/>As for me, I try to end my stories with something that encapsulates and punctuates the story.Dave Fragmentshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17985158361431606939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-47842798761395604162007-07-26T11:21:00.000-04:002007-07-26T11:21:00.000-04:00I think my current WIP ends with: And someday, my ...I think my current WIP ends with: <BR/><BR/>And someday, my son will wreak my revenge for me. <BR/><BR/>I think. I'm a pantzer after all.Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06185883760690309984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-71361591326384599332007-07-26T10:23:00.000-04:002007-07-26T10:23:00.000-04:00I try to make my ending line satisfying. One that...I try to make my ending line satisfying. One that, whether happy or sad, allows the reader to sigh and close the book with a smile.<BR/><BR/>Two of my favorites come from Tim Powers' work. <BR/><BR/><I>The Drawing of the Dark</I>:<BR/>"From the southeast the Turkish cannons began firing, but the wind blew most of the sound away, and to M-- it sounded like nothing but plodding footsteps receding away in the distance."<BR/><BR/>And the other is from <I>The Anubis Gates</I>:<BR/><BR/>"And as he rowed on, toward whatever might prove to be the true destiny of the man who'd been [names removed to prevent spoiling] and was not any of them any longer, he regaled the river birds with every Beatles song he could remember...except <I>Yesterday</I>."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-31527170957777511142007-07-26T09:49:00.000-04:002007-07-26T09:49:00.000-04:00I like to wrap things up at the end of my books. ...I like to wrap things up at the end of my books. I try not to have unanswered questions or loose ends - other than ones which the reader could easily figure out for themselves. My best ending so far, I think, is for my second book: "Satisfied its world was returning to normal, the coyote turned and loped away."<BR/><BR/>Usually the only book endings I remember are the ones that tick me off, and then it's no so much the wording but the feeling I'm left with afterwards.B.E. Sandersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04336115135400388268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-7470114752752691382007-07-26T09:44:00.000-04:002007-07-26T09:44:00.000-04:00"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne b..."So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past."<BR/><BR/>How can you top the last line of "The Great Gatsby?"<BR/><BR/>It's one of my favorites, for sure.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-85045063831013219732007-07-26T09:33:00.000-04:002007-07-26T09:33:00.000-04:00I love the father's dying word "tishel" at the end...I love the father's dying word "<I>tishel</I>" at the end of Steinbeck's <I>East of Eden</I>--the power to choose. I cried the first time I read it, in high school, and then had to explain the whole concept thing to my parents. But they really didn't get it. Nevermind. <BR/><BR/>Your line about making more tea is how my English husband solves every problem...Carrie Loftyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00589746700484524652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-53591283010654521072007-07-26T09:02:00.000-04:002007-07-26T09:02:00.000-04:00Endings are a tough one for me. I try, but I don'...Endings are a tough one for me. I try, but I don't know if I succeed. <BR/><BR/>I'll have to go home to the bookshelf before I can give my favorite ending lines.Krista Heiserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10954380095591232526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-66663582303069536802007-07-26T08:59:00.000-04:002007-07-26T08:59:00.000-04:00"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne b..."So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past."<BR/><BR/>This last sentence from F. Scott Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby haunts me as much today as when I first read it over 40 years ago.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04916013585763585093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-46474823210362765642007-07-26T08:47:00.001-04:002007-07-26T08:47:00.001-04:00Taming Eliza Jane by Shannon Stacey“Giddy up, Doc....<I>Taming Eliza Jane</I> by Shannon Stacey<BR/><BR/>“Giddy up, Doc.”<BR/><BR/>(once you've read the book, you understand why it's a laugh out loud funny ender)<BR/><BR/>Actually, all of her books have great enders. I know it's something that she thinks is important and she does a great job of it!Angela Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03083836635501265476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-25412620486941858112007-07-26T08:47:00.000-04:002007-07-26T08:47:00.000-04:00I struggle with endings. And about 95% of the time...I struggle with endings. And about 95% of the time I let the book go wishing I'd been able to come up with something better. <BR/><BR/>I think my favorite is from Dangerous Games. It ends with Hal, the sentient computer:<BR/>“And they lived happily ever after,” he mused. A very satisfactory resolution.charlenetegliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14061754720849284938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-47920109316084871462007-07-26T06:33:00.000-04:002007-07-26T06:33:00.000-04:00I'm usually solid at it; nothing so enchanting as ...I'm usually solid at it; nothing so enchanting as your examples, nor as pithy.<BR/><BR/>But, <I>Oracle</I> ends thus: And wasn't that the peace she sought?<BR/><BR/>The rest are mundane. Appropriate, but... <I>sigh</I> mundane...<BR/><BR/>As for other people's, do you have <I>any</I> idea how many books I've got? Okay, that would be a 'no'. This late in the evening I can't think of any endings...Jaye Patrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05595648222196000153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-85043374713764590222007-07-26T06:20:00.000-04:002007-07-26T06:20:00.000-04:00I try to give resolution and a twist.The end line ...I try to give resolution and a twist.<BR/><BR/>The end line of "An Ungodly Child" (released next April):<BR/><BR/>Only now, with Louis beside her, could Ada shed tears for the baby she had lost: Harold’s twin sister.Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343238.post-47678105157579256552007-07-26T03:44:00.000-04:002007-07-26T03:44:00.000-04:00That's a tough question. I've been writing for abo...That's a tough question. I've been writing for about a year, and am never happy with my last lines. AND, it seems that extra effort on it seldom leaves a better result. One day maybe.Deterministhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04630233168632221706noreply@blogger.com